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Cool script.
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
5 stars
Story structure:
3 stars
Character:
5 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
January 05, 2011
Excellent! This is a good idea! X-Men, Kick-Ass, Men in Black… This movies are great. Your script has a similar atmosphere. It’s a very cool story. Likeable characters. Dialogues are ok. It’s very promising project. I’m frank with you, this isn’t a masterpiece but very cool entertainment. I really like it.
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I like horror movies. I like "Eyes of Darkness".
Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
Premise:
5 stars
Story structure:
5 stars
Character:
5 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
5 stars
December 30, 2010
Your story is great. In my opinion this is a really fresh idea. Current horror movies often are bad and boring. Your script is different. Much better! It keeps in suspense. Plot is very interesting.
About dialogues, characters and story structure I can only say: Everything is ok. Atmosphere is dark. This is a considered work. Another advantage is the surprising ending. I really liked it.
Summary: You have talent. You are creative. I hope for seeing film on the basis of this script. You are on the right track. Well done!
By the way, „Eyes of darkness” is very catchy title.
Christopher Nolan, Jonathan Nolan, David Fincher, Zack Snyder, Roman Polański, J.J. Abrams, Steven Spielberg, Ridley Scott, John Logan, Roberto Orci, Alex Kurtzman, Martin Scorsese
Winner: Script Spotlight: Zombies vs. Gladiators Rewrite
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Script Spotlight: Zombies vs. Gladiators Rewrite
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script, Script Spotlight: Zombies vs. Gladiators Rewrite