Belinda E. Perry (Santa Fe)

The story line is familiar - and the name of the town doesn't ring true - it is a giveaway too early in the movie. Why would anyone plan a trip to the town of the dead - perhaps using the beast's name would be more subtle. how about 'Aldea del Bruto' (the village of the beast) or some variation with the correct Spanish grammar and not as obvious.
Spelling and punctuation, while not the heart of a good story, do interrupt a reader's focus on the characters and action.
sore/soar - it's/its - simple mistakes that are distracting.
The premise, while familiar as I said previously, can work as a horror movie of the kind now on the screen. With stronger characters and more edge, the movie could be appealing to those who love a good scare.
By the way, the name 'Nimrod' means hunter, and supposedly Nimrod was the great-great grandson of Noah. An Egyptian name would make this character stronger.