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My Last Real Summer, Matthew's Original Draft

6 out of 7 people found the following review helpful:

Fantastic! Absolutely LOVED the ending too!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
December 12, 2010
I wish there were more movies like this script. Why isn't there any? I can't remember the last time I saw a movie I felt good enough to bring my grandchildren to. Does everything have to be filled with profanity and endless gunfire? What I liked best about this story is that Scott is LEARNING to become a man. Bob is trying to put Scott on the right path, and we only get a hint as to his motivations until near the end. Also, it was intriguing that Scott's two friends had some depth. Celine, with her sibling issues and tumultuous home life, and Noble with his father intimidation problems. Deep down, I guess we all have our flaws. It was good to see a taste in those characters too. But this wasn't overdone by any means. Scott remained the focus. The Alcatraz connection with Bob was like icing on a well-made cake. What floored me was the ending. The axiom 'Earn the extra', while a bit profound, resonated in me. We all should strive to follow that rule. You got my vote!
 

Moon Ring, Scott's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Pulled at my heart - nice emotional struggle

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
December 12, 2010
What a great premise! If this were a novel, I'm sure I would read it. This is the kind of story I could see on television or at the movies - I wish it was there now. Jealousy rules some hearts, and you've done a fine job in depicting that. Well done.
 

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