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Latest Work

Credits in 5 works

Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Downloads Date
Created
Writer

Buddy, the Wonder Dog Ralph's 1st Draft (Script 2)

5.0 stars
(1)
3 01/21/13
Writer

The Answer? Ralph's 1st Draft (Script 2)

No rating
3 11/17/12
Writer

YOU WON MY SISTER Ralph's 1st Draft (Script 2)

No rating
4 11/03/12
Writer

It Came in the Mail Ralph's 1st Draft (Script 2)

3.0 stars
(10)
366 05/27/12
Writer

Stasis Ralph's 1st Draft (Script 3)

No rating
7 08/27/11

About

Just an over the hill wannabe writer trying like the other millions around the world to get their story told/sold. Now playing with 3D cartoon software and uploading my short films/scenes onto YouTube channel brokentube 1. (Great way to learn camera angles, how to move characters through scenes and space out that long-winded dialogue.) I do enjoy making the story up as I go along -- Same with my script writing.

 

Reviews Ralph Has Written

TOOTH, Pilot Script 2 - Matt/Claire Rivalry Version

2 stars
Sorry, didn’t see much comedy working here, just your basic story intro, then setting up the deaths of them falling down an elevator shaft. Start thinking of how to make people laugh on each page.
May 08, 2013

TOOTH, Mini-bible 2 - More Claire version

3 stars
The afterlife world could lead to crazy situations, ranging from life up there to confrontations in the real world, but will need to check the pilot to see how these worlds are likely to interact.
May 08, 2013

Superstitious Pete- “The Cat, the Ladder and the Lucky Rabbit’s Foot” Short Video 1 - Superstitious Pete: Promo video- "Introducing Pete and his family"

2 stars
Sorry, not really giving much of an idea of what your story is about, and the only chuckle I got out of this was the soda joke, but it was a good first attempt to create a trailer.
May 06, 2013

Annebots Short Video 1 - Promo

5 stars
This setup looks great; Junkyard, robots, children’s imaginations –endless stories to tell.
April 20, 2013

Dark Minions Short Video 1 - Promo

4 stars
Looks to have potential, but would need to see more; and if stop motion, episodes would probably be too long in production.
April 20, 2013

OowieWanna Short Video 1 - Excerpt from OowieWanna- Short film which inspired the pilot

4 stars
Production was topnotch and the child was cute and talented. The only thing I didn’t care for was her going into a clothes dryer, which is not the best thing to teach young children.
April 11, 2013

Favorite Movies

ET/Star Wars/Close Encounters Of The Third Kind/Star Trek/The Fifth Element/The Abyss/Die Hard/Lethal Weapon/Avatar/Kick-Ass/American Dreamer…
 

Influences

TriggerStreet.com (Now Trigger Street Labs)and its members, good & bad, are my number one influences. Without them I would have given up long ago, and most on TSL probably wish I had. lol
 

Following

5 People

Semifinalist: Best Script
 
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Winner: Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
 
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Winner: Script Spotlight: Zombies vs. Gladiators Rewrite
Finalist: Script Spotlight: Zombies vs. Gladiators Rewrite
Semifinalist: Best Script, Script Spotlight: Zombies vs. Gladiators Rewrite
 
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