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Strong story that could stretch the ending to resolve
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
5 stars
Story structure:
4 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
5 stars
Emotion:
3 stars
December 30, 2010
The premise of this story is interesting and makes sense. It really is more of a suspense/thriller with the character of Kia providing appropriate levity for what otherwise would be a very dark script. The dialogue is sharp. Contrary to some other reviews I liked the way the story starts. It really sets the scene and builds suspense without being obvious.
I would have liked to see a more involved ending. There is a lot of build up to that final confrontation and it gets resolved too easily. Maybe somehow involving the wife's spirit presence and something more than guessing what is written on a crumpled paper. The story had really built me up for the finale and I wanted something more.
Overall I could easily visualize this as a movie and one worth watching.
I would have liked to see a more involved ending. There is a lot of build up to that final confrontation and it gets resolved too easily. Maybe somehow involving the wife's spirit presence and something more than guessing what is written on a crumpled paper. The story had really built me up for the finale and I wanted something more.
Overall I could easily visualize this as a movie and one worth watching.