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My Work at Amazon Studios

Credits in 9 works

Mini-bibles

Credits Works Average Rating Plays/
Downloads
Date
Created
Writer,
Character Designer

Scruples Mini-bible 1 - Season 1

No rating
4 05/04/13

Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Downloads Date
Created
Writer

Twin Steve's 6th Draft (Script 6)

4.0 stars
(1)
11 03/30/11
Writer

Twin Steve's 5th Draft (Script 5)

No rating
5 02/28/11
Writer

Twin Steve's 4th Draft (Script 4)

No rating
1 02/28/11
Writer

Twin Steve's 3rd Draft (Script 3)

4.0 stars
(1)
7 02/18/11
Writer

Twin Steve's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

No rating
14 02/10/11
Writer

Twin Steve's Original Draft (Script 1)

5.0 stars
(1)
7 02/01/11

Pilot Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Plays/
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Date
Created
Writer

Scruples Pilot Script 2 - 2nd Revision

3.7 stars
(3)
12 04/29/13
Writer

Scruples Pilot Script 1 - Pilot

4.8 stars
(4)
21 04/19/13

More About Me

I'm generally bad at talking about myself. Someone once asked me, where I was from and I responded, from my mother. They told me they've been there before, too. I didn't know if that was a joke or not. But I laughed anyway to make them feel better.

I don't really consider myself a funny guy. People just tend laugh at what I say, even though I'm being serious. It's really a gift and a curse. My family still laughs at me when I tell them I'm a screenwriter. I reassure myself, they're laughing with me, and not at me. My dad, being the loving, honest father he is, reassures me they're laughing at me.

My inspirations for writing comes from watching movies by great and bad writers. I feel there is something to take away from either. Tyler Perry is the only filmmaker I could never stay till the end to watch. The reason is because every time I go to watch his movies, a fight breaks out or people right next to me are conversating, too loud. When I tell them to be quiet they just shout derogatory racial slurs and "yo momma" jokes at me. I laugh anyways to make them feel better.

Over the years, I've grown as a writer. I use to be 5' 6" and now I'm 5' 8". My advice to any writer trying to better their craft is don't let your parents read your scripts. One of my first scripts I gave them was about an unstable marriage and a divorce. The next year my parents split up. After that I wrote another script about parents that were serial killers. Don't think I'll ever be showing them that one.

I believe in giving and receiving constructive criticism. That is the only way to get better as a writer and a person. I try everyday to give constructive feedback, like when I'm driving and see a bad driver. I try to tell them how to be better, but the words they mouth back to me aren't thank you. It's the other one that ends with "you".

I really look forward to making new connections and meeting great people through Amazon Studios. Who knows, maybe one day we'll be sitting down for a few drinks and cracking jokes to each other. I promise I wont laugh at them because you're going to think I'm making you feel better.

Projects in Progress:
-Short Film "Penance" (Post production)
-Feature for Big Break competition
-Frank Millar's "Nemesis" short
-Spec for Disney fellowship
-Researching shorts for 48hour film festival
-Pursing Happiness
 

Reviews I've Written

Retail, Pilot Script 1 - "Hey what's going on?"

4 stars
Comedy is on point & I like the premise of it. The narrative is loose and needs to be restructured. Also work on the character's voices. This will greatly help with dialogue jokes. Check your grammer.
May 07, 2013

Disorganized Crime, Pilot Script 1 - The Legacy Continues...

4 stars
Structure does need work to turn this into a proper pilot. There were plenty of laughs in the middle but changed to very serious in the end. You do have some great characters to base comedy plots on.
May 06, 2013

With Class, Pilot Script 1 - Moon Walk

4 stars
A great story & theme. You're supporting characters seem too dependent on Kelly & act 2 feels draggy. You should cut it down from 52 pages to 35 at most. As a whole it's one of the better pilots on AS
May 04, 2013

UNder-Employed, Pilot Script 1 - Pilot Revision 2

4 stars
It's funny, but there are areas that need polishing. You're story has a very loose plot. Consider creating one for Nick & Carl. Formatting looks like it's for multicam show rather than single cam.
May 02, 2013

Thespians, Pilot Script 1 - Thespians "Pilot"

4 stars
The pilot had its funny moments but there are alot of issues with grammer and spelling. Max & James come off as underdeveloped & their relationship seems forced. Work on their backstory to polish it.
April 25, 2013

Suckerpunch and Leroy, Pilot Script 1

4 stars
Reminded me a lot like Black Dynamite and the Other Guys. Characters and comedy were hysterical. Great way to end it. I felt the action set pieces took away from the story & learning about characters
April 22, 2013

Favorite Movies

300, Inside man, Equilibrium, Avatar, Ong-Bak, Gran Torino, King's Speech, Fast Five, Aladin, How to train your dragon, Jingle all the way, Liar liar, Jurassic Park, Looper, Rise of the Guardians, Kung-fu Hustle, Kick-ass, Seven, Cowboy Bebop
 

Influences

Any hard working individual that has made a name for themselves
 

Following

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Winner: Best Script
Finalist: Best Script
Semifinalist: Best Script, Best Horror Script
 
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