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Flat Pennies, Robert's 7th Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Love it!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
March 04, 2011
Okay, you removed those daydreams and now the screenplay is so much easier to follow! Love the quicker read too! Good luck with this project, Robert!
 

Flat Pennies, Robert's 2nd Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Improvements making it better

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
March 01, 2011
 

Flat Pennies, Robert's 5th Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Great title

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
March 01, 2011
 

Flat Pennies, Robert's 6th Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Great revision!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
February 24, 2011
Best revision so far. This version rocks!

Hope to see it in the movies some day.

Your hard work is paying off.
 

Flat Pennies, Robert's 4th Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Still a fun movie

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
January 14, 2011
 

Flat Pennies, Robert's 3rd Draft

1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Most creative screenplay I've read

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
January 04, 2011
What a strange concept for a movie. The main guy in the script doesn't know reality from make believe. I would love to see somebody like Terry Gilliam make this movie. The ending really faked me out.
 

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