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Interesting relationship
Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
Premise:
3 stars
Story structure:
1 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
No rating
Emotion:
3 stars
January 08, 2011
Rich Great .... good job in you thought process, This was interesting , held my interest untill the business ventures, not really getting that and maybe your holding back on us.. I thought maybe a crazy twist perhaps with the dwarf or the girlfriend... something one would not expect. Keep up the good work!! you've got a fan! Val
Great .... good job in you thought process,
This was interesting , held my interest untill the business ventures, not really getting that and maybe your holding back on us.. I thought maybe a crazy twist perhaps with the dwarf or the girlfriend... something one would not expect. Keep up the good work!! you've got a fan! Val