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At Amazon Studios

 
 
 

My Work at Amazon Studios

Credits in 4 works

Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Downloads Date
Created
Writer

Board Boys Max's 3rd Draft (Script 3)

No rating
6 02/14/11
Writer

The Stranger Max's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
5 02/01/11
Writer

Board Boys Max's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

No rating
1 02/01/11
Writer

Board Boys Max's Original Draft (Script 1)

3.0 stars
(1)
3 01/12/11

More About Me

I've been in filming for over ten years, working on features, promos and commercials.
I have had the great joy and pleasure of working with Tim Pope, Mike Leigh and Nick Love, the later of which just told me, 'write, as long as it's something you know, someone will like it. And f@$k spelling!'
 

Reviews I've Written

Baby Face Tiger, Rhett's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Good first draft

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
January 13, 2011
Good idea, having known only of the atrocities he caused in later life (from BBC - so probably not as accurate!); an interesting man to write a film about.

Personally I like a script to flow a bit more in the actions, rather than a bullet point direction - it makes me feel part of the story, rather than stage direction, which also causes me to start to skim through it. I also felt that a lot happened in what would be only a 90min film (if thats what it's intended to be).

Reading through it, I felt like he came across as a quite a hero - which I'm sure he was by his people, yet I couldn't get passed what he did to people, almost the opposite to 'Che' which I guess would be the nearest film I could put it next to.

Lastly and I'm sure this is only due to the conversion from final draft to an rft file - the formatting of the script got to me. Half of the first page was on the title page - but that really gets to me (must check my script now!)

I will read the next draft as I'd like to see what happens.

I guess what it all comes down to is, would I watch this on Cinema - only if a really good director was behind it. Would I watch it on TV - yes.
 

Favorite Movies

True Romance, Benjamin Button, Seven, Inception, It Happened One Night....
 

Influences

Tim Pope, Nick Love (when's he's good!) Tony Scott, Ridley Scott, Christopher Nolan and David Fincher.
 

Following

1 Project

(Thriller and Suspense, Drama) Rhett Metz

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