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Credits in 5 works

Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Downloads Date
Created
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RERIDE Joseph's 4th Draft (Script 4)

No rating
2 09/08/11
Writer

RERIDE Joseph's 3rd Draft (Script 3)

3.0 stars
(1)
6 02/05/11
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RERIDE Joseph's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

3.0 stars
(1)
8 01/31/11
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HEIRESS Joseph's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
3 01/22/11
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RERIDE Joseph's Original Draft (Script 1)

4.5 stars
(2)
6 01/22/11

Reviews I've Written

Triple Spring Lake, Sharon's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Need more of the Columbian angle.

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
February 01, 2011
I believe you are a better writer than me, so a critique is hard for me to do.
Having lived in Florida for all of the eighties I really like the sinkhole angle. I think it is unique.
Also drugs were a huge part of the culture back then and now, so it is a good tie in.
I believe the Vice President has to be good or bad. I think being duped doesn't work. Maybe the Colombian sub plot could be worked in here.
I love all the cave scenes. The bonding between the President and his grandson is very good character development.
Is there anyway to give the President's daughter an expanded role.
I think you have the talent it takes to compete in this contest. I bet this is a good novel.
Good Luck
J.M. Goodart
 

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