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Latest Work

Credits in 6 works

Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Downloads Date
Created
Writer

Vampire's Shadow Benjamin's 3rd Draft (Script 3)

No rating
11 04/30/11
Writer

SOULTRIP Benjamin's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

5.0 stars
(2)
7 04/30/11
Writer

Vampire's Shadow Benjamin's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

No rating
3 04/03/11
Writer

SOULTRIP Benjamin's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
6 03/31/11
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BERNSTEIN Benjamin's Original Draft (Script 1)

5.0 stars
(1)
20 03/30/11
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Vampire's Shadow Benjamin's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
4 01/27/11

About

I am a self made screenwriter and director of short films in Germany
My main job is speech therapist but my passion are MOVIES.

I'm trying hard to get bigger and better with every project till I get on the big screens by writing screenplays for cinema. That's my dream!


I was nominated for ”Sehsüchte Screenplay Award 2008“, Berlin and referenced for “Hessischer Screenplay Award 2008“, Frankfurt ***


I write scripts since about 10 years. My favourite genres are thriller, drama, horror and sci-fi.
I love to write about the dark side of men.

I think that a good movie should make you feel something. Theres nothing worth than a movie that makes you feel detached.

 

Reviews Benjamin Has Written

DON'T SAY ANYTHING, Damon's Photo-Animatic

3 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

This test movie is thrilling and emotional as well

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
May 08, 2011
I really enjoyed watching this movie.

The production is very professional. I like the style of the chosen pictures. They gave a good impression about the characters. The speakers did a very good job and I love the score that Damon Stout created. The music and the cuts push the thrilling scenes to the top.

To combine the pictures with some videoparts was a great idea and it really works. Awesome!!!

The opening scene has great atmosphere and makes excited what’s coming next.

In the main plot I feld a little length. Especially in some of the highschool scenes and the investigation-scenes. In my opinion the cop was a little too clumsy. But when the thrilling scenes get more frequently the story has a great gripping flow.

The final is very emotional and thrilling as well. Besides looking at the final scene as a speech therapist, I thought: “Well, for all the years without talking she’s got a surprising good voice.” But looking at it as a writer and thriller fan, I think it’s a really good working, emotional scene that puts the tension to a great climax.

Good job!
 

Frame-Up, Taylor's Original Draft

1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Fast forward action! It's great because breathing is boring!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
April 30, 2011
Hey Taylor,

I read your script FRAME-UP in two sessions. It’s a well written entertaining story with articulate straightforward dialogues. I had fun reading it and two sessions are very fast for me.

I like the opening act best because it’s got great flow and puts you right into the story. Without time for taking a breath the story takes you on a ride.

The biggest intensity lies in the superb written dialogues. You’ve got real good instinct to let it rock between the lines on a sarcastic way.

I have some constructive thoughts too:

The poisoning of Kari. It’s an interesting point in the story that’s got a raw deal. She’s afraid to die but I don’t remember any symptoms of the poisoning. It would be thrilling, if Kari would have to fight more against the poison in her body. If it weakened her in moments she should rather run. Maybe this part could even help to get more closer to Kari. All in all, I liked her, because she is a great funny character. But sometimes, I didn’t get a take on her. Sometimes, she is very tough, jumping in pools from the 3rd floor and making sarcastic comments when a guy is shot right before her. And sometimes, she’s like a hysterical girl that has to be sheltered. With the symptoms of the poison and her dealing with it, you could create even more intimacy between her and the reader and give her a straighter line.

The almost-sex-scene when Kari and Jay are kidnapped is cool. But the non-reaction of Howie is even cooler. ;)) For him, it must be the most normal thing in the world that they want to have sex in their cell. If I were him, I maybe would say: “Well, you’re getting comfortable? Rather get your cloths on, you freaks!”

All in all, I had great fun reading your script and it was a great action entertainment.
 

Favorite Movies

The Fountain, Memento, Mulholland Drive, Fight Club, The Wrestler, Big Fish, Deathproof, Apocalypto, Inception, Black Swan, Mr Nobody, Seven, Eden Lake, A Nightmare on Elm Street, Carry, Misery, Sin City, Big Lebowski, Perfume, American Beauty...
 

Influences

Christopher Nolan, Tim Burton, David Lynch, Darren Aronofsky, Steven Spielberg, Quentin Tarantio, Tom Tykwer
 

Following

37 People

Winner: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Script
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Script
 
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Semifinalist: Best Script
 
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