Rick Leverette (Jasper)

Hi Lisa,
I just finished reading Quicksand and it was a delight.
On page 70. She is about to say something she knows is wrong. ( I personally get it and I do like it).
But I can see other Reviewers saying: that belongs in a novel because you can’t read her mind.
On page 93. She’s just (a) bad girl. (Wow just one error in your whole friggin Script!) Bravo!!!
You built the tension up high and I felt really sorry for Jaden. So glad it ended differently than I anticipated.
One of my favorite scenes was the last two pages as they talk matter-of-factly and the soft humor at the end.


BTW: You should be given a Black Belt as an editor and reviewer; you are awesome!

Hi Zaki,
I downloaded and read your SP Evolver tonight. It was an excellent read. I always try to guess the ending. I thought that Evolver might show Sara compassion at the end since Evolver had absorbed Jay.
I thought that Evolver would sling her to safety right before the explosion and die saving her.
At any rate it was a first class ending and I loved it.
Fantastic Action...

Rollin' Stolen is High octane with several incredible chase scenes. Great one-liners that make you laugh out loud. A flawless read that will entertain you from start to finish. Pure nail-chewing seat-wiggling fun...

Hi John,
I picked Der_Golem to read just from the incredible scream that Rebecca did in your trailer. It sent chills down my back.
This symbol : { } means a space needs to be tightened up.
I have found a few errors along the way and will share them now:
Pg 16. Paul heads out of the (office).
Pg 22 (He) sits up
Pg 33 your parents were (in) a car accident
I in no way wish to appear nit-picky just helpful.
Pg. 23 looks down { } at his feet ( I missed this one earlier.)
Pg. 43 April questions Rebecca
Pg 47. I though life was supposed
Pg. 47 Both { } are huddled
Pg. 54 as Rebecca gets closer (he)
Pg. 61 what (were) they doing
Pg. 63 I’m (tired) of people
Pg. 63 I’m just tired (of )being
Make sure you put “Fade Out” on the last page
I am very visual and the mud man coming up out of the Earth scared the crap out of me. ( I had the same feeling that the poor sap in The “Wicker Man” must have felt when he saw the Wicker Man at the end of that movie. I loved your ending
Excellent work John.

I really enjoyed this movie. Dillion has his hands full when he gets his toughest assignment, an instant family minus mom. This story is littered with action, humor and some tender moments. The ending has a bit of a surprise twist. Will go to see when it gets to the theatre.

Kosher is an engaging adventure fraught with malice and mystery. This story starts out with a wrongfully convicted man whose release back into society brings unexpected success and romance into his life.

But just like life, bad things will come back to try and destroy his newfound paradise.
The unidentified evil culprit bent on changing Kosher’s destiny will leave you guessing
till the breathtaking, stunning end when he is revealed.

An absolute masterpiece!

Dwayne Johnson is Kosher!

One of the best Scripts on Amazon!