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Semifinalist: Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
(Science Fiction and Fantasy, Action and Adventure) When a young man from the future crash lands on Earth while rescuing his shipwrecked father, he is kidnapped and forced to repl...
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Semifinalist: Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Back on Planet Earth Clark's Original Draft (Script 1) |
3.0 stars
(1)
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47 | 06/30/11 |
More About Me
I am an optioned/produced screenwriter with one Supernatural Comedy in development at Parallel 33 Pictures and two produced shorts.
Reviews I've Written
PARANORMAL PARK, Llywelyn's Original Draft
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Unique premise but needs work
February 02, 2011
Favorite Movies
The Searchers, Lawrence of Arabia, Bridge on the River Kwai, Original STAR WARS (1977), Inglorious Bastards, Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?, Stalag 17, The Great Escape, How the West was Won, In Harm's Way, Anything by John Ford.
Influences
John Ford, John Huston, Henry Hathaway, Spielberg and Lucas, Orson Welles.
Structurally it was okay, but character motivations need work. Dialogue is to OTN (on the nose) for much of the story. People don't talk in complete sentences, they start, stop. Overuse of Wrylies to indicate action peppers the script. Formatting needs work as well.
Again, great idea, just needs better execution on the next draft.