Writer
Credits in 5 works
| Credits | Works | Average Rating | Plays/ Downloads |
Date Created |
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Writer, Director |
"UNDESIRABLES" Alcee''s Narration (Test Movie 1) |
No rating
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75 | 01/04/11 |
| Credits | Works | Average Rating | Downloads | Date Created |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Writer |
"THE STORY OF A LOUISIANA HURRICANE" Alcee''s 2nd Draft (Script 2) |
No rating
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97 | 12/14/10 |
| Writer |
"UNDESIRABLES" Alcee''s 2nd Draft (Script 2) |
5.0 stars
(2)
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170 | 11/28/10 |
| Writer |
"UNDESIRABLES" Alcee''s Original Draft (Script 1) |
4.5 stars
(4)
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186 | 11/18/10 |
| Writer |
"THE STORY OF A LOUISIANA HURRICANE" Alcee''s Original Draft (Script 1) |
4.0 stars
(2)
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158 | 11/18/10 |
(Thriller and Suspense, Action and Adventure) William Dubiak
(Action and Adventure) Carlo Treviso
(Comedy, Kids and Family) mucheru Njaga
The story structure was very good, it flowed well from page to page, there was a short gap of a little confusion of where it was going to lead to, but it corrected itself.
The characters were well defined, you know who they are.
In some ways the dialogue was a little off for me, but that could be from ancestry differences. But, I could definitely comprehend what the characters meant and how it personafied their personalities.
Emotion, it hit the right chords..
Good work.