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"In the Chips"
Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
Premise:
5 stars
Story structure:
4 stars
Character:
3 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
April 11, 2011
I like the story line however I think the character development can be improved upon. I failed to see the transition in Frankie which resulted in his action at the end.
I also think the dialogue needs work for the sake of consistency.
I also think the dialogue needs work for the sake of consistency.