Hi, My name is Valera Ainsworth. I studied film at Santa Rosa Jr. College, illustration at The Academy of Art University and did an internship with Lucas Arts at Skywalker Ranch. My focus is achieving auteur level in film, writing and graphic novels/movie tests. The highlights of my life are my two children and now my grandchildren, plus living in the Bay Area for most of my adult life. I'm looking forward to sharing my works through Amazon Studios and viewing all the creative talents of others. Enjoy!
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A fun film that some pre-teens can identify with. Dialogue is good and the writing does inspire some smiles. There is definitely some potential with this script. Thank you for letting me review this.
Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
Premise:
3 stars
Story structure:
3 stars
Character:
3 stars
Dialogue:
3 stars
Emotion:
3 stars
July 10, 2011
The author has added a fun twist to a serious subject that is told in such an entertaining fashion that will have pre-teens smiling versus being turned off. The main concern I have with the script are the jump cuts that forced some re-reads to clear up my confusion. Thanks for letting me review your work. Enjoy!
George Lucas, Francis Coppola (I love his direction, true storytelling with images. An incredible artist.), Eisenstein, Les Blank, Spielburg, Herzog, Woody Allen, Clint Eastwood, Sylvester Stallone and yes, the list goes on and on.