JuLius AuGustus (Oklahoma city)

As mentioned in my review title, I see what you're trying to do, but it does need a lot of work. What kind of story was this?? What was the hit man trying to accomplish? I noticed how you were trying to keep the story going with the action and consistent gunfights, but this doesn't allow you any time to get to know the characters themselves. Who are they really? There wasn't much revealed about them. I didn't feel like I got to know them. I wasn't rooting for them to make it throughout the movie because I didn't know anything intimate about them really. What transformation did the hit man endure? Controlled pacing needs to be exercised. I think it's a good idea without an actual vision, but still has potential. Keep it up though, you can only get better....