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Going, Going, Gone, Phil's 5th Draft

1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Good Attempt, Needs Major Re-editing

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
1 stars
 
Character:
1 stars
 
Dialogue:
1 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
May 20, 2011
Great idea but it takes too long to get into the plot. The characters aren't 3 dimensional or believable. The scenes are too short and too many.
 

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