I'll give it to you straight. I hope you do the same for me. If I wanted to hear how great my script was I'd send it to my mom. I'm here to give and take constructive criticism. I'll talk more about what doesn't work rather than spending time telling you what does work. The stuff that does work doesn't need to be fixed. If it hurts your feelings to mostly deal with what is broken then you don't want me to review your work.