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Credits in 4 works

Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Downloads Date
Created
Writer

Alien Weekend. Richard's 3rd Draft (Script 3)

No rating
2 10/21/11
Writer

Aggravating Sumner Richard's Original Draft (Script 1)

5.0 stars
(1)
8 07/01/11
Writer

Alien Weekend. Richard's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

4.6 stars
(5)
13 06/23/11
Writer

Alien Weekend. Richard's Original Draft (Script 1)

5.0 stars
(1)
5 06/23/11

Reviews I've Written

Cavemen, Xolani's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

cavemen.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
July 14, 2011
I loved this story, a movie like this could definitey stand toe to toe
with anything in the pixar or dreamworks back catalogue.

It's a very easy read from begining to end, the dialogue is punchy and
very visual, i think live action would be wasted on this, it's got cgi written
all over it.

A big budget animation with star voices released in time for the summer, with
all your characters toys available with every happy meal.

Dino reminds me of my nephew, the Kunga cavemen remind me of my dad and
the whole story makes me want to be a kid again.

Good luck with this one.
 

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