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Roadtrip Sex Party, Jerry's Original Draft

5 out of 11 people found the following review helpful:

New Twist on Classic Road Trip Movie

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
June 23, 2011
Great script! The flow of this script was incredible and it was a super fun and quick read. There are a few scenes that still make me laugh out loud when I think about them. I also found myself developing a connection with the three main characters (Phil, Bryan, and James). I felt like I personally knew these guys and found myself rooting for them. This movie shines light on the old saying that it's not where you're at, it's who you're with... unless you're at the super bowl, then it kinda matters where you're at.

Also great incorporation of the film title into the script. In my opinion, this was perhaps the most clever incorporation of a title in anything I've read or watched in a while.

I've read quite a few scripts since Amazon Studios started their contests and this has got to be one of the best yet. These Amazon Studios contests were created for people like you to get your work recognized. Keep up the good work!

My three wishes:
1) This script gets picked up;
2) I get to buy the unrated Blu-ray version someday;
3) Jeff Bridges agrees to play Hobo Nick when the film gets made.
 

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