8
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10
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A great story without great dialogue.
Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
Premise:
5 stars
Story structure:
3 stars
Character:
3 stars
Dialogue:
2 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
June 28, 2011
12 Princesses, Rob's Storyboard is a interesting story. Though one may have painfully wait for the first few scenes to pass before they want to finish watching. Rob's Storyboard is good but not intended for a general audience.
The songs are well composed but the dialogue can be very painful. Though the personality of the mad king fitted very well, It would be nice if the other characters acted a little more mature. The sense of humor many characters have will get very annoying to the older audience. The lack of facial animation plays a small part in this so hopefully the finished product will be better.
The musical shows great potential. At times the story seemed as deep and attention grabbing as Disney's Tangled. However there is a great need for improvement on other areas before it can surpass a title such as that.
Rob Gardner is a fantastic composer and I myself am a huge fan. If the finished product is to remain the same they really should go with an animated film. Hopefully they will avoid making something like "Wonder Why" and try their darnedest to make a unique musical that everyone including children, teens, and adults can enjoy.
I will follow this project and continue to review it as it develops.
The songs are well composed but the dialogue can be very painful. Though the personality of the mad king fitted very well, It would be nice if the other characters acted a little more mature. The sense of humor many characters have will get very annoying to the older audience. The lack of facial animation plays a small part in this so hopefully the finished product will be better.
The musical shows great potential. At times the story seemed as deep and attention grabbing as Disney's Tangled. However there is a great need for improvement on other areas before it can surpass a title such as that.
Rob Gardner is a fantastic composer and I myself am a huge fan. If the finished product is to remain the same they really should go with an animated film. Hopefully they will avoid making something like "Wonder Why" and try their darnedest to make a unique musical that everyone including children, teens, and adults can enjoy.
I will follow this project and continue to review it as it develops.