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Karate Kid meets Bring It and delivers the FUNNY
Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
Premise:
4 stars
Story structure:
4 stars
Character:
5 stars
Dialogue:
5 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
August 04, 2011
An interesting and funny premise. I laughed all the way though. Peggy reminded me of Peg Bundy. Jerry reminded me of Woody Harrelson in King Pin. With all original dialogue I found myself living in a trailer park LMAO. Judge has to work for his brother as an Ad spinner. Rusty an Ex Ad Spinner champion encourages Judge to enter an Ad Spinning Competition. He is accepted and the fun begins. His first day of training begins with helping his coach get dressed. Funny stuff. Judge’s desire to impress Ashley keeps the story real and tight. Judges Elderly neighbor, who thinks the Germans are invading, is the cherry on top of this Comedy cake. Favorite line. ‘Your wife’s name isn’t Brad is it?’
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Chad is a Genius at dialogue
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
1 stars
Story structure:
2 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
5 stars
Emotion:
3 stars
August 03, 2011
I love all the characters in this play. Chad is a Genius at dialogue. The dialogue is so well written that it makes the characters come to life. I loved Kimmy and Reeves but the situation and the plotline of the story is a bit far fetched. I know it is a comedy. But there are just some things in this play that don’t wok for me. The Robed Man under the bridge, I didn’t get it. Going on tour with a pregnant woman just seems contrived. Moving to Ohio to record an album is even more contrived. Although my favorite line was “Randy I swear to god if it’s another dead body…”. Which is what I really don’t get. The dialogue is so fantastic it is almost real. It’s as though the one genius dialogue writer lost a bet to back woods Hill Billy and had to write the dialogue for his fantasy script. By the way I loved the line, "My vag hurts everytime I see a baby...".