2
out of
2
people found the following review helpful:
Very Original
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
4 stars
Story structure:
4 stars
Character:
5 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
July 12, 2011
This script needs more reviews! Amazing story, love how the two storylines connect so well at the end. I can easily see this script doing big things, alot of imagination. Script had me locked in early on, toward the end it gets somewhat slow, this would easily be made up for with the special effects and different visuals when showed in a movie. Great Job!
2
out of
5
people found the following review helpful:
Funny
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
3 stars
Story structure:
3 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
3 stars
July 11, 2011
Really enjoyed the script, i started off telling myself i was only going to read the first few pages. an hour later and i had read the entire script. I liked that the storyline was not very predictible, also not trying to hard to be funny very fresh scripit, good luck with it!
