ofer gal : Amazon Studios

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July 13, 2011

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Credits in 2 works

Scripts

Credits	Works	Average Rating	Downloads	Date Created
Writer	Her Majesty's Volunteers ofer's 2nd Draft (Script 2)	No rating	2	09/26/11
Writer	Her Majesty's Volunteers ofer's Original Draft (Script 1)	No rating	3	09/25/11

Reviews I've Written

The Detourist, James's Original Draft

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Great script. funny, good pace, nice setting, great dialogue.

Overall Recommendation:

5 stars

Premise:

5 stars

Story structure:

4 stars

Character:

4 stars

Dialogue:

5 stars

Emotion:

5 stars

February 01, 2012

I liked it and read it in one evening.

Clearly the dialogue is the best part, funny and very polished.

If it were a movie, I'd go to see it. (With the kids)

The only part which is a bit unbelieveable are the bad guys. Mr. Parker Big and his thugs.

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Sky Pirates, Gary's 6th Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Great! Clearly desrves to be a winner. Excellent action sequences. Love story a bit forced, and I didn't understand why she turned him down after the kiss. She also has to be more feisty.

Overall Recommendation:

5 stars

Premise:

5 stars

Story structure:

5 stars

Character:

4 stars

Dialogue:

4 stars

Emotion:

4 stars

September 11, 2011

Action is great.

Love story a bit forced, I didn't like she turns him down after they kiss. Not too clear to me why.

I would make her character more feisty. How many Germans did she kill? She has to settle the
account with the man who killed her father. Doesn't she?

All in all it would make a great action movie. Good luck!

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