Luke Dearden (Trout Lake)

I do like this script. The civil war setting mixed with the demons/zombies is brilliant. However, that is really the only clever part. The plot is pretty straight forward, predictable, and by no means mind blowing. The author tried to tie some family background in there, but it wasn't too substantial. Heck, you would have had me if the scene where the girl was dreaming was actually real!!

Lets be honest, was anyone questioning whether or not the girl was going to disobey Mister and return to "save the day"? Nope, that sequence of events has only appeared in hundreds, if not thousands, of story lines already.

With that said, the writing and dialogue is top quality, and is what ultimately kept me entertained. This script could be turned into a solid movie. It isn't lacking in action. Like I said, I like it! Respect... congratulations