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At Amazon Studios

 
 
 

My Work at Amazon Studios

Credit in 1 work

Scripts

Credits Works Average Rating Downloads Date
Created
Writer

FIRST LIGHT Darikus's Original Draft (Script 1)

4.0 stars
(2)
2 05/10/12

More About Me

Scriptwriter and composer.
 

Reviews I've Written

alien i, Cecil's Original Draft

1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

alien i

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
June 03, 2012
A trippy twist to the usual police drama. Very imaginative, Cecil.
 

Pray for Dawn, Stephen's 2nd Draft

2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

New twist to a vampire story ....

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
October 12, 2011
The emotion kept me into the hero's journey. I like that a vampire story is set in Brisbane/AU, an unusual place for such a story normally set in Europe or the Americas. The premise needs work, but it does capture the core of the story and theme. Dialogue needs some rewording, and I 'hear' the same dialogue spoken by several characters -- but, that could be the vernacular of the group with common interests/goals much like how jargon is spoken in certain occupations. Characterization is defined; each character is his/her own. Structure is really good. Some typos are evident should be corrected. Other than the aforesaid, I feel this story has potential. Good work, Stephen. I'm following your script as it improves and, hopefully, rises to the upper tier.
 

Chupacabra, J. Angel's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Strong story concept.

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
August 05, 2011
The protagonist's character arc is somewhat blurred, but the journey spells it out. Chupacabra ... the mysterious, elusive and horrifying "goat bloodsucker" we only hear about, but never has humanity encountered such a creature. I know of no other motion picture about it. In the right hands this script could fly high. I'll be watching this one as it moves up the ranks. Good concept, J. Angel.

Darikus Whalen, writer of "Symbiont"
 

The Rat Catcher, Cecil's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Good hook. Good characterization. Good dramatic appeal. Great job, Cecil.

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
August 02, 2011
 

Favorite Movies

Gladiator, Last of the Mohicans, Braveheart, Last of the Dogmen, Spiderman, Batman
 

Influences

Everyone
 

Following

3 Projects

(Horror) Cecil Davis

(Thriller and Suspense, Horror) Stephen Batchelor

(Thriller and Suspense, Science Fiction and Fantasy) Cecil Davis

3 People

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Semifinalist: Best Script
 
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