W.A. Henderson Hollywood

Touchy, touchy, touchy subject-- executed with ease. That is in my mind what creates a work of genius. Your reliance on the characters to exploit the story is profound and practical. You used these entities efficiently in order to bring emotion to the reader, and you did so with fashionable delicacy, by placing them in a relative subject matter. You created a story that cannot dodge recognition because of it's emotional worth.

This is a wonderfully written screenplay. Aside from the dialogue being witty and believable your characters have very real and distinguished traits. It's relieving to see that every character has their own identity in this story-- it makes for a memorable experience. The idea of identity theft is intriguing yet subtly horrifying. If this, or when this is made, I imagine it will be the first premise of identity theft, properly illustrated on big screen.

Your translation of the mood is executed well, by the use of music and outstanding narration. I can tell that you were keying on the emotions of grief and hopelessness rather than horror. That makes your direction somewhat unique and impressionable.