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Computer programmer working in I.T. I want to do something else in life so I am going to try Screenplay writing.

 

Reviews I've Written

Touching Blue, Scott's Original Draft

2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

X-Men meets Scanners and gives birth to Screamers

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
August 04, 2011
The set up in this story is fast, wordy, but fast. You get a sense of Blue’s power right away. Blue reminds me of Lisbeth from the girl with the Dragon Tattoo. The story moves quickly and is intriguing enough to make it a page turner. The pages would turn faster if there was less ink though. Sometimes overly describing a teenagers room invites people to start skimming. The supporting characters around Blue are true to life and made more so by Scots ability to write good dialogue. This is a mystery right up to the last which will leave you on the seats edge right up until the very end.
 

Survive This, J.B.'s Original Draft

4 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

Wildy Funny

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
August 04, 2011
I didnt think I would like it at first. But once it picked up it was a scream. Chad was funny with the scream but was almost a bit overdone. I loved Chantal her lines were perfect. The plane crash was a bit much but the whole I think I messed my drawers and my shoes was very funny. The end may need some work but over all it was funny and a good read.
 

Favorite Movies

Dune, Star-Trek, Star Wars, Oliver Twist
 

Influences

William Burrouhs, Jack Kerrouak, Nietzsche, A.A. Milne
 

Following

3 Projects

Winner: Best Script
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Script
 

Rayfield Scott

(Drama, Action and Adventure) Ryu Miyaki

(Comedy, Action and Adventure) J.B.

(Thriller and Suspense) Jim

4 People

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Winner: Best Test Movie, Best Photo Storyboard, Best Table Read, Best Dialogue Track, Best I Think My Facebook Friend is Dead Trailer
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Photo Storyboard, Best Table Read, Best Dialogue Track, Best I Think My Facebook Friend is Dead Trailer
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Photo Storyboard, Best Table Read, Best Dialogue Track, Best I Think My Facebook Friend is Dead Trailer, Best Script
 
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Winner: Best Script
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Script
 
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Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
 
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