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Hello all, here's my bio in a nutshell:
One of my first Jobs was at a movie theater in 2000 I worked my way up to management and projectionist where I often handled 35mm prints of movies and trailers, little did I know that I already had my hands on what my future would hold
Fast forward to 2009 I Graduated from California State University of Fullerton with a bachelors in Radio Television & Film, where I co-directed a short film called Comatose (Super 16 Film, not digital).
My Senior Year I interned for ABC Family, where I eventually was hired on freelance to work for their on-air promotions department as a PA, which then eventually led me to be a floating Coordinator and Associate Producer.
After working for ABC Family, I was picked up by a post production company called Wiser Post, a movie trailer finishing house. Through this company I became affiliated with it's fairly new sister production company Lockbox Entertainment.
Somewhere in between all this, I worked a variety of jobs, from Customer Service, Personal Banking, to Pizza delivery. I also studied Music Theory and Theater, which eventually led me to Television and Film.
The pace is too slow, making a lot potential funny moments less humorous.
I would stick to your concept of animation to real life, as it could potentially work; I would consider more insert and closeups for the slower moments in the movie.
The acting could use more direction on all fronts, both in animation dialogue and live action.
Good concepts across the board, you just need to find a way to speed things up within a scene, and keep the viewer engaged.