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cute, but needs more work
Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
Premise:
3 stars
Story structure:
3 stars
Character:
2 stars
Dialogue:
2 stars
Emotion:
2 stars
September 01, 2011
More development of the characters needed
Less musical breaks
Dialog and Song Lyrics need some rework - will tick off parents everywhere with the farm mom telling the farm boy that his dad can't stop him if he doesn't know... BAD message for a kids movie, take it out - rethink and reword the message there - first scene with the gardner and the fairy is just irritating
Story worth pursuing - so rework until you get it right. As it is now, the kids would watch [once] while they ate breakfast...not a box office hit.
Less musical breaks
Dialog and Song Lyrics need some rework
- will tick off parents everywhere with the farm mom telling the farm boy that his dad can't stop him if he doesn't know... BAD message for a kids movie, take it out - rethink and reword the message there
- first scene with the gardner and the fairy is just irritating
Story worth pursuing - so rework until you get it right. As it is now, the kids would watch [once] while they ate breakfast...not a box office hit.