At Amazon Studios
My Work at Amazon Studios
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Scripts
| Credits | Works | Average Rating | Downloads | Date Created |
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Public Eyes Alexis's Original Draft (Script 1) |
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4 | 09/06/12 |
More About Me
I am very outgoing and have such a passion for the arts. Acting is my true passion. My acting idol at the moment would have to be Tom Hardy. He's such an underrated actor but is truly phenomenal in all the films he's in.
Reviews I've Written
Soul Legend, Bryan's Original Draft
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Good Concept but needs work.
February 27, 2012
America’s Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Antony's 1st Draft
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Amazing!
February 24, 2012
I absolutely loved this story and thought it was soooo inventive! I've never quite heard of a story like this but one wouldn't think it would be this clever of an idea to try. Enjoyed it throughout and really have nothing bad to say about it. Just brilliant! Good job!
A Place To Stay, H.'s 2nd Draft
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Not what I expected.
February 23, 2012
I enjoyed it but thought the opening scene was fairly slow and didn't really keep my attention but did grab it as I continued. The dialogue just seemed very typical and didn't seem like it was unique at all. Some of the things being said seemed very obvious that they were going to come next but good job. I did enjoy the way it was put together.
The Travelers - Earth, Lauren's 3rd Draft
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Very creative and inventive!
February 20, 2012
I can honestly say I've never read a script quite like this. The premise is very interesting and I was really intrigued throughout! Amazing job!
Favorite Movies
Warrior
The Dark Knight Rises
Lawless
Inception
XMen
X2:XMen United
XMen: The Last Stand
Van Helsing
Underworld
Star Wars 1, 2, and 3
Hellboy
Thor
Iron Man 1 + 2
Captain America
Transformers 1, 2 and 3
The Dark Knight Rises
Lawless
Inception
XMen
X2:XMen United
XMen: The Last Stand
Van Helsing
Underworld
Star Wars 1, 2, and 3
Hellboy
Thor
Iron Man 1 + 2
Captain America
Transformers 1, 2 and 3
Influences
George Lucas for his amazing creativity.
Michael Bay for his amazing storytelling.
Michael Bay for his amazing storytelling.
Following
4 Projects
(Comedy, Drama) Tim Holland
Winner: Best Dialogue Track, Best Script
Finalist: Best Dialogue Track, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Semifinalist: Best Dialogue Track, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
In The Silences
(Science Fiction and Fantasy, Action and Adventure) Scott Mullen
Winner: Best Dialogue Track, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Actor, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Touching Blue
(Thriller and Suspense, Science Fiction and Fantasy) Scott Mullen
4 People
Winner: Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Just some grammatical errors like in the beginning when you say "these scientist" instead of "these scientists"
You never really introduced you're characters before they were talked about so I never got a mental image of each one.
The emotion didn't seem to be there because you didn't really describe how each character was feeling.
Loved the dialogue though, very unique and creative.
These were the only things that drew me away from the actual story so if you worked on this, this would be amazing!