Amanda

Stopping time on and off will almost always slow a screenplay to a crawl. Here Scott manages to usethe time stops to good advantage although I think he could lower theamount of times it's done and let more happen during those intervals.

Overall it works.

I looked through the earlier drafts and was interested, but didn't have the time then. I recently downloaded the third draft and am very glad I did! I reviewed the author's script "The Evil," which I found to be a great read. I was surprised when I realized "Different worlds Together" was in such a different direction than his last script. It turns out it was just as good. Here he uses fantasy, psychology and dreams as a format for a creative and unique world view. Our understanding of reality is challenged often as we are led to reasonably accept a new reality. The premise is unique and the characters are developed well as the suspense builds to an emotional finally. His method of tying together so many loose threads at the end is remarkable. I consider it to be a fantastical love story and a great read.

I loved this script. The action sequences, many in flashbacks, were well placed througout, and the dialogue made for easy enjoyable reading. The strong writing kept me always looking foward to the next page (I read right through).

His lead character, Wicca, developed throughout, right up to the thrilling climax, with the last twist almost at the very end.

His two sets of secondary characters, Salem and Zoraida, and the adult witches, grew almost as much as Wicca.

An excellent read.

Many vampire scripts, in this one it's the vampire characters that grow in power.

Many interesting turns, pieces of bodies in sheets - still alive.

Some characters you expect may become main characters, are unexpectedly-not.

A sucking bloodfest.