Finalist: Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
Semifinalist: Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
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Winner: Best Script, Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Table Read, Best Script, Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Table Read, Best Script, Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
(Comedy, Action and Adventure) Before James Bond, there was Benjamin Franklin: inventor, philanthropist, and the single largest exporter of kicking British as...
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Finalist: Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
Semifinalist: Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
America’s Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String Jason's 1st Draft (Script 39) |
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17 | 01/25/12 |
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An engineer by training and profession, a funny-man in my own mind, trying to make it big in movies.
Reviews I've Written
I Think My Facebook Friend is Dead, Francisco's Cut
3
out of
3
people found the following review helpful:
Very nice effort, could be better
January 09, 2012
Favorite Movies
Wedding Crashers
There's Something About Mary
Hot Tub Time Machine
The Jerk
The Shawshank Redemption
A Few Good Men
There's Something About Mary
Hot Tub Time Machine
The Jerk
The Shawshank Redemption
A Few Good Men
Influences
Judd Apatow, Adam McKay, and the writers and directors of my list of favorite movies.
Things I liked:
- Loved the cast. The main characters did a great job.
- Professional feel: nicely-shot, quality sound, nice soundtrack, FX and action good
- Dialog was crisp and natural
Things I think could be improved:
- Could use a comedy punch-up. There were many amusing moments and the light tone (until the end) was fun to watch, but it just seems like it should be funnier.
- Story was very straightforward, could use more depth. Maybe a good subplot or a clear character arc would have helped.
- Another reviewer mentioned needing Facebook (the company) on board with the movie. That makes sense, not sure what's involved there to make it happen.
I'm not sure how this would do as a Hollywood production. It's a nice indie movie as it stands, but it feels like it needs that "something extra" to be successful on a larger scale.