Anthony T DeSimone (Boston)

It's Austin Powers meets Spy Kids meets Archer to me. It's entertaining. It has a good flow. I think because it reminds me of so many other things out there in the world, it doesn't seem that original. But in today's Hollywood, that probably means you have a script that will sell! ;)

The version I read was your first draft so I think you made some improvements. The dialogue was good. Each character had their own distinct voice.

It's something I would watch on HBO. Not sure if I'd pay to see it in theaters. But I hope it gets there!

I liked the concept. I would definitely watch this on TV. It reminds me of Batman or Daredevil a lot so it could be a little more original. The dialogue is great. The script and it's structure needs a lot of work though.

There are a lot of typos in the script. Definitely clean it up before it's ever seen by people in the industry. You should remove all the camera angles however. The character introductions need some work. You should also put in their ages.

I give any new TV show I'm interested in at least 3 episodes. Once this script is cleaned up a little, I'd definitely watch it and would love to see how the next 2 episodes come out!