Karen (Houston)

First of all I just want to say that the overall quality of the story board and the voice actors were superb! The storyboard was timed well for the most part and the voice actors did a great job bringing life to the characters. Now moving on to the actual story, of which was really well executed. Major Kudos to the writer for establishing a raunchy romantic comedy, well at least I hope that I understood it right. The scripts timing was executed great, the three acts were well established and the characters where fitted well into the narrative. Much of the dialogue used in this script/screen test will be well received by adults from the ages of 18+. The dialogue is a crucial role in any romantic comedy and it also demonstrates that the script on it's own is funny without the gimmicks of visual jokes.
The movie was great and so much of the dialogue and events remind me of Sorority Boy's, not that the movie wasn't original, but the story has been present before in cinema. Knowing that, the reason why I gave Character a "Very Good" was because to me these characters were somewhat the same as those in Sorority Boy's even the nerds! The next lowest score I gave this movie was in the category of Emotion a "Good" because honestly I don't feel connected with the characters. They seem cliches on their own and aside from their goals of finding love and winning "maneaters/cocksmen" awards the characters seem very hollow which really didn't give me the emotional feel and that's ok because it's a comedy, I shouldn't feel anything else but the urge of laughter. Which brings me to my final point. All of these are not flaws because the movie is a comedy. I as a viewer couldn't care less of the characters because at the end of the day I go see a comedy so I can just laugh. Overall this movie is four stars on the merit that it delivers what it promises and does it well with top notch dialogue.