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Very Entertaining. A quick read.
Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
Premise:
5 stars
Story structure:
5 stars
Character:
5 stars
Dialogue:
5 stars
Emotion:
5 stars
January 13, 2012
I loved the script and would see the movie. Great characters, very clever authentic sounding dialogue with banter and subtext. An improvement over previous drafts. Only minor criticism involves format-scene headings, actions and descriptions are in a different font than dialogue. Also lots of page breaks between character name (at bottom) and their dialogue (top of next page)-both give you an inaccurate page count. Nicely done. Very witty. Keep writing. You're good.
