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The Sound Of Naked Spurs, Karl Peter's Original Draft

1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

a really great old fashioned western retold

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
February 09, 2012
Naked Spurs is a really good old western retold,
Growing up in the seventies remembering all the good spaggetti western`s this took my right back there, a brilliant read with characters we all remember, if i had this on film i would watch it over and over, it captured me from the onset, i could almost taste the dusty street and feel the tumble weeds pass me by, this story would work really well as a picture` absolutly brilliant.
 

Serial Pool Attendant, Karl Peter's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

a funny story in a unfunny situation

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
No rating
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
February 06, 2012
I began to read this and was a little confused as to why and how they were seperated growing up,but very soon i got into it, albeit it a little weird i found myself likeing the connection that Shark and Alex have, and im not sure i should like these, but Alex`s daydreams as she`s stood and drifts away are so funny and i think at some point we have all had these crazy daydreams, its a little bit wierd but funnily captivating :)
 

A History Of Fear, Karl Peter's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

An emotional journey of a girl and her teddy bear

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
No rating
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
February 06, 2012
a beautiful story of innocence,
the story of a little girl and her imaginary friend/companion that takes on the role of a teddy bear, this is a captivating story of unconditional love and heartache in this moving story of Raya`s struggle with emotional loss and the strength to get through it all with the aid of her imaginary friend/guadian (bear),
i recomend this to everyone but keep tissues to hand the emotion may just pull you in
 

Memoirs of Dirty Max, Karl Peter's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

not your average womaniser, worth reading fully to understand Max`s cold hearted ways!!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
January 25, 2012
After reading the synopsis, i thought yeah typical Alfie (womaniser)
but after reading about Max before the speed dates and internet dates i felt pity and saddness for him, here is a single man that is emotionaly battling with his heart & love & women, after a failed relationship and the loss of his sister, he is trying his hardest to resist emotion, a really good story that even women that have been on the recieving end of this type of character will enjoy.
 

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