Allen Wayne Ray Jr : Amazon Studios

At Amazon Studios

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February 17, 2012

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7 projects, 11 people

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Credits in 9 works

Scripts

Credits	Works	Average Rating	Downloads	Date Created
Writer	Nature of a Man Allen's 2nd Draft	No rating	-	[Not published yet]
Writer	Ballers Allen's Original Draft (Script 1)	No rating	2	12/14/12
Writer	Son of a Gun Allen's 3rd Draft (Script 3)	No rating	1	11/30/12
Writer	Nature of a Man Allen's Original Draft (Script 1)	5.0 stars (1)	2	11/20/12
Writer	DeadBeats Allen's Original Draft (Script 1)	5.0 stars (1)	4	09/28/12
Writer	King of Battle Allen's Original Draft (Script 1)	5.0 stars (1)	3	08/01/12
Writer	Idlewild 2 Allen's Original Draft (Script 1)	5.0 stars (1)	2	07/13/12
Writer	Son of a Gun Allen's 2nd Draft (Script 2)	4.0 stars (1)	4	06/18/12
Writer	Son of a Gun Allen's Original Draft (Script 1)	4.0 stars (1)	6	05/23/12

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Allen Wayne Ray Jr. is a creative writer, who has talent for penmanship, channeling his thought into song. Although music is not his only gift, he has enthusiasm for writing screenplays. At age 9, he was signed on by Birdman Baby Williams record label UNLV, to strictly handle movie deals & press kits; whereas, he gained skills as a creative writer. He has worked on many films throughout the 90's ,and he has gained talent which can match the big screen. Titled blockbuster like: Hot Boys, Dante's Peak, There's something about Mary & Lord of the Rings. He is currently working on projects of his own: A semi-Biopic film about a little boy's trials of purpose, followed by the down to earth novelette, titled Jewels, an urban Action film about one man's only chance to get what he deserves: money, respect & revenge, titled Ballers, also a 2d Comedy animation, titled Son of a Gun.

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Reviews I've Written

Blackburn Burrow, J. H.'s 5th Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

From Dark to Light.

Overall Recommendation:

3 stars

Premise:

5 stars

Story structure:

1 stars

Character:

4 stars

Dialogue:

4 stars

Emotion:

3 stars

June 08, 2012

Story Structure- The finest scripts are outlined with perfection. There are a lot of things you should work on, when writing action headings, the sentences that display the movement of the characters. In fact there were tons of parts, where i did not know if it were day or night. These simple details can be changed by simply placing a reminder on top every action heading for ex: Int. Cabin. Day, Int. Bedroom. night, Ext. Wilderness.Day, Ext. Grove. Use times of day like .Sunrise or .Midnight only a few times in a screenplay, the rest of the time it must be Day. Night. A certain amount of pages represent one day a & a certain amount of pages represent one night.

Character- It takes at least 12 to 25 characters to fill a full feature screenplay. Although describing the characters in detail should be set aside on another document & not on the script itself. For instance creating a Character bio would be an excellent idea, portraying your characters fully.

Dialogue- It was well written, dialogue was not out of date lining up with the civil war. Very well written.

Emotion- When creating motion writers look for certain words like: Blazing, fiery, Unhappy, Silence & Chuckle, which you used most of them but not all. Keep that in mind.

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