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Sky Pirates, Gary's Animatic (hi res)

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Sky Pirates - good movie

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
March 22, 2012
This movies needs a lot more foreshadowing to take it from a good movie to a great movie. You know from the beginning that the Major is more than he appears but you don't know if he is a good guy or a bad guy till the end. This distracts from the flow of the script. The scenes with the cook need just a little work. They are historically accurate but more is needed to explain his rapport with the pygmies. How did he learn to shoot,etc. The scenes in the cave also need some work. Sara's explaination seems a little weak, maybe the use of foreshadowing here would help with the leap from an airship to the atomic bomb.
 

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Winner: Best Test Movie, Best Dialogue Track, Best Trailer, Best Script
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Sky Pirates

(Action and Adventure) Gary Dragan Milin

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