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No way this merits high reviews
Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
Premise:
3 stars
Story structure:
2 stars
Character:
2 stars
Dialogue:
2 stars
Emotion:
3 stars
April 16, 2012
I know this is a test but it's still important for them to get facts correct.
You can't make fake names on Facebook! Like he friended Jessica he must have also friended the blogger and the Asian girl for them to see his "emergency" status message.
Too much car time. Music needs work. Intro is way too long, we get the idea of serendipitous meeting Jessica online. It happens all the time.
You can't make fake names on Facebook! Like he friended Jessica he must have also friended the blogger and the Asian girl for them to see his "emergency" status message.
Too much car time. Music needs work. Intro is way too long, we get the idea of serendipitous meeting Jessica online. It happens all the time.
D'Marco character needs to be replaced.