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THE NIGHT RUNNER, Richard's 2nd Draft

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Nautical Ghost Stories

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
April 23, 2012
there is a great premise here, please keep developing!
 

Touching Blue, Scott's 3rd Draft

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great premise with inherent conflict

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
April 23, 2012
A suspenseful read and great way to set up characters and the world they live in. You established rules and used them to guide/inspire the action and conflict. Way to go.
 

Taiko Island, Sarah's Original Draft

1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

MIT!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
April 23, 2012
Nice work!
 

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