At Amazon Studios
jan oconnell (west hollywood)
Writer, Producer, Designer, Illustrator, Editor, Camera, Photographer, 17 years experience from indies to large budget films!
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17 years in LA LA land working on films, behind the scenes from with some of the most amazing producers, directors, writers, designers and actors...always learning, that's what is amazing about this biz.
Reviews I've Written
I Think My Facebook Friend is Dead, Donnie's Original Draft
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I don't know about this one....a professional rewrite then see?
May 10, 2012
Favorite Movies
Klute, Midnight Cowboy, GodFather, Serpico, Blues Brothers, A Night at The Opera, Seven, The Game, We Need to Talk about Kevin, Ants, Avatar, Toy Story, just to name a few.
Influences
David Fincher, learned how important visuals are in prepping a movie. John Frankenheimer, setting up shots, Walter Hill, know what you want to shoot, Robin Schiff, comedy writing at it's best, Alvin Sargent, rewrites!
SO, on that note, I would agree with one person here... can't get pass the first ten pages which is death in Hollywood (even though I re-read to page 30). Like the title, needs a major rewrite, think amazon passed this solely on facebook hype and tech savvy readers. Hence, that's where the problems can lie, hard to shoot stories based off of computer screen...even Social Network never did any big numbers in the US...did overseas, based off of Fincher's rep...he's a God like figure in the European film-making community.
Would like to see the next draft to fully review this script.