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Grand Theft UFO, Chris's 3rd Draft

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Well written, terrific project

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
June 07, 2012
 

And There's No Lovely Vanna, Pilot Script 1 - Perhaps It's Lacrosse

3 stars
You did search/replace on character STAN ... need to fix underCHARLIEd, assiCHARLIEt, AfghaniCHARLIE. Best part was CT scan. Have the boys look down in their own pants.
June 05, 2012

Horseplay: A Genre's Last Stand, Pilot Script 1 - Horseplay

4 stars
Very funny. Good work.
June 02, 2012

The Heavy, Pilot Script 2 - Fixed a few errors

4 stars
Good situation, likeable characters, extra credit for good use of the medium with slo-mo scene and breaking the timeline to show a surreal lampoon of the antagonist's vanity.
June 02, 2012

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