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Well written, terrific project
You did search/replace on character STAN ... need to fix underCHARLIEd, assiCHARLIEt, AfghaniCHARLIE. Best part was CT scan. Have the boys look down in their own pants.
Good situation, likeable characters, extra credit for good use of the medium with slo-mo scene and breaking the timeline to show a surreal lampoon of the antagonist's vanity.