Sara (Malibu)

I'm a fan already. It's atmospheric and reminds me of the classic horror movies, but fresh and new. I'd love to see this brought to life. My only criticism is technical, you seem to be missing the word 'will' on the very last page but it's so minor. Loved the story and the world and the characters. Especially the banshee, not at all what I expected a banshee rendition to be like but seems as though this is staying true to how banshees are in actual folklore. Best of luck!

I can see why this was optioned. Fun and intriguing puzzles and characters interact with each other in charming ways. I liked it for all the same reasons I liked The Mummy and Indiana Jones. Has some scary parts too :)