Daniel Ringer (Visalia)

Quite well written but not terribly funny. Certainly handles the zombie thing better than HURD.

If this was longer and the dialogue a little more organic, it might make a decent romcom. But as a primetime comedy, it doesn't work.

Few formatting issue and some jokes just don't work but I like it. Pretty clever in parts.

Everyone is too rapey, casual and mean. Stretches belief and it gets boring. What asshole will she run into next? Also, too much humor comes from one liner meanness. Extended cleverness would be nice.

Zombie gimmick ends up not amounting to much beyond a few jokes and a memorable but short bit with a character called Fred. And all of the non-Craig human characters are just sort of there.

Well written but ultimately just not very compelling. It's not that funny and it's not that dramatic.