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Good film - Brilliant Potential
Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
Premise:
5 stars
Story structure:
4 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
2 stars
June 29, 2012
A couple of laugh out loud moments, the hot coffee scene for one.
With a few re-shot scenes & development on the music I think it could be a real good film. Love the storyline, and I think quite a few people can relate to it.
I think it should be completely invested in, with some further work on the odd scattered scene & transitions. Some scenes like the ending, and a central scene or two could be extended - as sometimes I felt it was perhaps condensed, or more room to explore the scene?
But beyond the first 20 minutes, it really roped me in & tended to keep my attention. I hope you guys are really happy with what you developed. Thanks for entertaining me on this boring Friday evening!
With a few re-shot scenes & development on the music I think it could be a real good film. Love the storyline, and I think quite a few people can relate to it.
I think it should be completely invested in, with some further work on the odd scattered scene & transitions. Some scenes like the ending, and a central scene or two could be extended - as sometimes I felt it was perhaps condensed, or more room to explore the scene?
But beyond the first 20 minutes, it really roped me in & tended to keep my attention. I hope you guys are really happy with what you developed. Thanks for entertaining me on this boring Friday evening!