I was born and raised in Brooklyn, New York. When I became an adult, I decided to join the military and I didn't think I would stay long but twenty years later I retired. After I retired, I worked four years before I decided to work towards a degree. Now, I am following my heart to turn my hobby into my profession.
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Works Well
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
4 stars
Story structure:
3 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
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August 01, 2012
In the Silence is a great read. I enjoyed following Sara as she wandered out of her posh environment into the world. This story would be great to see in theaters. Besides a few minor formatting errors like lower case slug lines and character names, the only part of the script that left me with questions was the touch. I get the part where the world explodes into life when Sara touches someone and those touching when Sara depresses the watched button go in the silence. I also get that those not wearing the watch freeze when they touch someone in the silence. I think that works well. However, I thought the elevator working while everything was silence was a little confusing. It gave me the Transformers kind of vibe as if the elevator was coming to life. In addition, the story structure could use some work. I like to know who the antagonist is earlier in the story and see the antagonist closing in. There are several ways I see this working. Overall, the story kept me interested and wanting more.
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Professionally Crafted
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
4 stars
Story structure:
4 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
July 26, 2012
Myth of a Modern Man storyboard is captivating. The artwork is professional, voice-overs are believable, and music is engaging. I not much into romantic comedies but every now and then I find one that is done well enough to keep me watching. Your storyboard is one of those that I wouldn’t mind seeing made into a feature film. The title is the only thing that I find confusing. What is the myth? Are you saying that the man’s animalistic nature is a myth?
Overall, great job and I hope to see this on the silver screen someday!
John Singleton, Oscar Micheaux, Toni Morrison, Iceburg Slim, Zora Neale Hurston, Guy Ritchie, Paul Haggis, Spike Lee, Tyler Perry, Quentin Tarantino, etc
