I am a writer who has many experiences and a life time of real life stories to tell. My goal was to learn music and express my thoughts in sound. I added photography and experimented with sculpture to view my ideas in these formats. Acting was natural, where I was raised entertainment was the community trade. Writing was the medium that took the most effort to master. Today, I am still learning how to express my deepest memories on yellow paper.
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Strong title.
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
3 stars
Story structure:
4 stars
Character:
4 stars
Dialogue:
4 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
July 30, 2012
This is a unique comedy that expresses sex from a wide angle view with dark tones warm feelings. The action pushes and pulls and is weaved into the dialogue. The intro slowly invites the viewer into film. However I like the style overall.
This trailer builds intrest and moves the emotions.
The excitement is hard to contain as the music creeps up on your blind side before you know you are hooked.
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Very unique title .
Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
Premise:
4 stars
Story structure:
5 stars
Character:
5 stars
Dialogue:
5 stars
Emotion:
4 stars
July 30, 2012
the plot starts off a bit slow,however it builds.The dialogue is well developed and stands out like an old western tell. I need to see the visual to get a clearer understanding of the action and story form.
This film is moving, I felt like getting into the story.The music
bed kept me waiting for more. Watching the plot develop into
an action packed event brought back memories of "Star Wars" .
Great story,strong emotion,the structure is well developed
the music supports the idea. The movement is forward into
action. This film is worth waiting for on the big screen.
This film has the power to move the emotions. The structure is solid the theme is dark. This message
is like an X File which is very effective.I want to see more.
Close Encounters,Jumpers,The Day After Tomorrow,Star Trek,Miami Vice,God Father ,X Last Stand,Aeon Flux,2012,Clover Field,Alien vs Predator, X Files,I Robot,Battle Star Galactica,Blade, Enter the Dragon, Karate Kid, Soul Food,Men of Honor,Matrix,
Frances Ford Coppola's use of the language of film has inspired me to write clearly what is on my mind. Martin Scorsese 's expressions encourages me towards truthfulness in story telling.
The action pushes and pulls and is weaved into the dialogue. The intro slowly invites the viewer into
film. However I like the style overall.