Favorite Movies
Inception, The Dark Knight, Back to the Future, Wedding Crashers, Hook, The Departed, Star Trek, Ferris Bueler, The Bourne Series, 21 jump Street, Superbad, The Changeling, Blow, Harry Potter, Troy, Big Trouble Lil China, Weird Science, Catch me if..
The film to me has shades of "Pride and Glory," Niner's character was spot on resembles to me "Max Payne" played by Mark Wahlberg. The stories body was great and the ending is what put the script over the top for me, the ending is "perfect."
When reading the ending, I got that chill, I can remember two distinct films off the top of my head doing the same thing your script did. "Safe House," when Ryan Reybolds character tells the head of CIA "I'll take it from here sir," and "The Bourne Ultimatum," where Julia Stiles character is sitting in the coffee shop and hears the news saying that Jason Bourne had been shot from a rooftop and fell into the east river. The reporter then goes on to say the body has never been recovered, and Julia's character begins to smile. That's how the ending impacted my view and take on your script, all in all great, story and read.
Best of luck
Michael